Audience feedback

Today we were visited by two media practitioners from UWE, that specialises in film production and magazine design. They gave some constructional criticism about my film, for example the opening credits need to be shorter, the scenes after James has been shot need to be shorter, the lighting need to be better, and the ending credits need to make more sense. I have also shown the film to my target audience, which is late teens and adults and have received positive feedback. here are some quotes from the audiences:

- "Altogether i thought the film was very enjoyable, it was a clever intake in the action/thriller genre!" - Harry Tully 17

- "The film was very interesting and fun to watch" - Alex Package 17

- "I thought it had some good enigma and I wouldn't mind seeing the rest of it!" - James Phillips 19

Here are some constructive comments that Myra Lee from UWE said about my foundation film project:

- shorten the opening titles

- rearrange the credits

- re-shoot alarm clock scene

I think that if I complete these improvements, it will make the film better for my audience.